Thursday, 30 July 2015

TAIAMAI ROCK

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  1. Anonymous30 July 2015 at 19:40

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  2. Mrs Brajkovich30 July 2015 at 20:47

    Great job, Arlo. You sure noticed lots of things using your senses on the way to Taiamai Rock.I can tell what you heard, saw and smelt.Have you noticed that your poem is tall and towering just like the rock? That is very groovy writing.

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  3. Anonymous31 July 2015 at 13:16

    Hi I like your poem Arlo but you have just fresh trees you need more adjectives in that sentence.

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  4. Anonymous3 August 2015 at 13:58

    You have a good range of adjectives.
    You have spelled 'spot' wrong.
    You should add more adverbs.

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  5. Anonymous3 August 2015 at 15:29

    Great writing Arlo.You sound like you noticed a few interesting things on the walk.

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