Yay! we arived I pounced out of the car and I put on my new togs as the cold refreshing water hit my feet.now it's time for body boarding I caught a wave as it tumbled and trumbled.
Success criteria 1.Use this for your title: No 1 2015 2.Begin your blog with this date: 12 February 2015 3.Take a photo of yourself with your in-built camera and paste it to your page. 4.As you write, describe things using at least 3 of your 5 senses. 5.Work with a buddy to edit your work so that it makes sense,has correct spelling,grammar and punctuation, and meets all the success criteria. Message from your teacher:Hi, Arlo.You used some interesting adjectives and verbs however you only met 1/5 of the success criteria-and that was the least important one.Pretty disappointing considering you had 40 minutes to complete this task.
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1.Use this for your title: No 1 2015
2.Begin your blog with this date: 12 February 2015
3.Take a photo of yourself with your in-built camera and paste it to your page.
4.As you write, describe things using at least 3 of your 5 senses.
5.Work with a buddy to edit your work so that it makes sense,has correct spelling,grammar and punctuation, and meets all the success criteria.
Message from your teacher:Hi, Arlo.You used some interesting adjectives and verbs however you only met 1/5 of the success criteria-and that was the least important one.Pretty disappointing considering you had 40 minutes to complete this task.