Riding a horse
Friday 20 February 2015
this week at school we have been learning how to describe things by using our senses.
this week at school we have been learning how to describe things by using our senses.
wow boy I said in a squeaky voice. thump I fell off into the thick dark mud.yuck I said to my self I leaped onto the horse and off I went.my
ReplyDeleteSuccess criteria
1.Use this for your title: No 2 2015
2.Begin your blog with this date: 20 February 2015
3.Copy in the learning outcome from the teacher’s example.
4.As you write, describe things using at least 3 of your 5 senses.
5.Work with a buddy to edit your work so that it makes sense,has correct spelling, grammar and punctuation, and meets all the success criteria.
Message from your teacher:
Hi, Arlo. this week you met 3/5 success criteria.You used your senses of sight and hearing in your story to describe your voice and the mud.Your story contains lots of errors, is unfinished and is a bit confusing for a reader.You had 40 minutes to complete this task.Do you think you made good use of your time?