My Hook Sentence

19 May 2015

We have been learning how to write hooks to capture an audience's attention.

The whole class is making a shared hook book. Here is the link.

https://docs.google.com/presentation of the classes hook book

Matua Ken

A strong tall rugby player.

Playing bull rush.

Excited.

Caretaker.

Mrs Jones

A scientist

Awesome runner

Excitement

Nice teacher

number 3 2015

6 of March Friday

making donuts.
beep beep the do-nut machine turned Zzz the nice cold mixture got poured into the warm do-nut machine then I could smell the warm hot tasty donuts cooking as I was tasting the cinnamon and sugar.

number 2 2015

Riding a horse

Friday 20 February 2015

this week at school we have been learning how to describe things by using our senses.

wow boy I said in a squeaky voice. thump I fell off into the thick dark mud.yuck I said to my self I leaped onto the horse and off I went.my   

number 1 2015

beach

Yay! we arived I pounced out of the car and I put on my new togs as the cold refreshing water hit my feet.now it's time for body boarding I caught a wave as it tumbled and trumbled.

sushi

Sushi

1.Making sushi.

2.eating  

3.Favorite food

“Mum, is sushi nice,” I asked. “Of course it is,” she said in a happy voice. Soon all the sushi was plated up and Mum shouted “Tea time!” “Thank you, mum,” I said in a pitiful voice.

Crunch! I took my first bite. It was delicious. The juicy flavors of chicken swirled in my mouth. Man my mum makes the best sushi ever. “Mum, that sushi is awesome,” I gurgled as I swallowed the last mouthful.

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Sushi is my favorite food. I sang all night non stop, sushi , sushi, sushi.

Soon it was breakfast time. I snuck into the fridge and grabbed a piece of sushi. YUM!

Giraffes

Giraffes are mammals and are the tallest animals on earth.

Appearance

A giraffe’s coat is yellow covered in little brown hexagons. They have a long neck.

Reproduction

Female giraffes give birth standing up. When the male giraffe is 7 years old it is ready to mate.

Diet

Giraffes eat leaves and hay. Giraffes only drink once every few days.

Habitat

Giraffes live in the  Savannah of Africa and in the woodlands.

conclusion

Did you know that the giraffes habitats are getting destroyed.